Caution never worried me
I've always kept it cool
my cap is off, that
is either
good or bad
formless function,
ending derivative
of your mouth on my lip
caused connection straight down the gullet
you watch when I am empty,
you fill me irregularly.
I wonder, do you always enjoy the last drop
oh yes. this makes me wish I followed the prompt more closely.
ReplyDeleteA questioning canteen worries about the last drop, but has no control over content. Not fair.
ReplyDeleteNicely done. :-)
ReplyDeleteI like how you chose to do this prompt~ Sounds a lot like the view of life, the control and lack of it~
ReplyDeletemr. probable,
ReplyDeleteA very clever use of the poetry prompt. The view as seen by the canteen itself!
Eileen
You ended this poem amazingly! And what a great object to write about/from.
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